nother tune

[ShawnD64]

kinda gave up on this one and started working on another tune. figured i would see what you guys thought of this...
thanks for listening...

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[Weizy]

hey Shawn this link is not working for me. let me know if its just me.

thanks!

[ShawnD64]

need to sort out my site renewal (sp?)....

[Weizy]

no worries mate. my site is the same state as well :)

[ShawnD64]

we are in business.... thanks for trying to listen.... i think you were the only one.
either that, or people thought it sucked :lol:

[Weizy]

thanks Shawn i am dling it now. will post tomorrow with some feedback...

[ShawnD64]

thanks for taking the time :D

[Weizy]

hey shawn i have listened to your track a few times now. i like what you have going here. how close to finished would you say this is?

one thing you may want to do is to shuffle up your drums a bit. add some fills or little breaks or something maybe. this seems like the kind of tune that some proggy jock would wanna open with. is that what you are aiming for with this ditty? if that is the case then i would say you have a nice little track here. nice work mate. also if you have anything else go head and post it up cuz i am always down to listen :)

[ShawnD64]

hey shawn i have listened to your track a few times now. i like what you have going here. how close to finished would you say this is?

one thing you may want to do is to shuffle up your drums a bit. add some fills or little breaks or something maybe. this seems like the kind of tune that some proggy jock would wanna open with. is that what you are aiming for with this ditty? if that is the case then i would say you have a nice little track here. nice work mate. also if you have anything else go head and post it up cuz i am always down to listen :)

thanks dude, it is not close to finished. i dont really ever know when i am finished. i stopped cause i got bored of it. was hoping some people may have some ideas to help me close it out... and tell me if it is any good. thanks for the feedback. i appreciate it :D

[ShawnD64]

oh and what was i going for? i dont really think about it. i just start with an idea and keep adding shit i like. so, it would be nice if a proggy jock rolled out with this :)

[Weizy]

the only other possible thing i can add to my feedback is to maybe add in a strong lead of some sort to put this track over the top.

cheers mate :)