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  • breslin44
    Fresh Peossy
    • Mar 2006
    • 42
    #1

    Production New Track - Ny'ay

    New one uploaded people - Ny'ay
    Feedback welcome
    myspace.com/benbreslin
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    • ShawnD64
      Quickshot the Minute Man
      • Jan 2005
      • 1252
      #2
      Re: New Track - Ny'ay

      ok. i like the parts, but you need some variation imo.

      it just seems to drag on... that melody is nice (the one that startrs around 4.10), but it just seems to go on and on. you need to change that. maybe using it less, or automate the dekay/release on it throughout the track or add some efx to it.... maybe the song is too long? dunno, i like it... but maybe you just need to work on the arrangement a bit.

      its a great start ben ... build on it.
      http://soundcloud.com/scd64
      http://www.myspace.com/scd64
      http://b-sidesradio.blogspot.com/

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        • breslin44
          Fresh Peossy
          • Mar 2006
          • 42
          #3
          Re: New Track - Ny'ay

          thanks for the constructive feedback shawn

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