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  • TheMightyGreg
    Editor Shmeditor
    • Nov 2006
    • 1362
    #1

    Production New Track 'Yellow Eyes' - Feedback Please!

    This is my third or fourth effort but it's the first one that I'd really want anyone else hearing!

    http://www.defected.com/mix/GregSawyer_YellowEyes.mp3

    Not 100% finished or mastered yet, but would really appreciate some feedback.

    Cheers
    Catch my bi-monthly show on UB Radio

    http://www.ubradio.net/djs/greg-sawyer-99?sort=7
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    • jeffrey collins
      Not cool enough
      • Jun 2004
      • 7429
      #2
      Re: New Track 'Yellow Eyes' - Feedback Please!

      Being that you do work for Defected, I would have expected more melody in there. And that melody annoyed me...but that's just me bro.

      I would have liked to hear some changes in the chords that you did, perhaps with a few single line melodies to really keep things moving.
      Jeffrey Collins: Painter
      My Painting Blog

      http://soundcloud.com/jeffreycollins
      My Soundcloud page.

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        • Weizy
          MCast Resident DJ
          • Jun 2004
          • 3285
          #3
          Re: New Track 'Yellow Eyes' - Feedback Please!

          The only feedback I have on this is that the percussion section stays relatively the same all the way throughout the track. You might want to consider adding some backbeats and having a transition or two that moves into some slightly different arrangement to keep things moving along.

          The track has some great potential as I would certainly place this one in my record box as an early house groove. Nice work!

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